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What Jokes Teach Us About Writing Novels

What Jokes Teach Us About Writing Novels

Posted on April 21, 2021March 17, 2026 by mark

If You Can Tell a Joke, You Can Write a Novel

Most people believe writing a novel is complicated.
You need talent, structure, pacing, character arcs, tension, resolution…

But here’s something surprising.

If you can tell a joke well, you already understand how stories work.

Because at their core, jokes and novels use the exact same storytelling mechanics.

Timing.
Structure.
Expectation.
Payoff.

The only real difference?

A joke takes thirty seconds.
A novel takes three hundred pages.

Let’s look at why.

 

The Hidden Structure Inside Every Joke

Consider a simple joke.

A man leaves a bar late at night while it’s raining. Wanting to avoid the long walk home in the storm, he decides to cut through a cemetery.

In the darkness he slips, falls… and lands in a freshly dug grave.

He tries climbing out, but the rain has turned the dirt walls into mud. Every time he climbs, he slides back down.

Eventually he gives up and decides to wait for the rain to stop.

An hour later, another man leaves the same bar and decides to take the same shortcut through the cemetery.

He too slips and falls into the same grave.

He tries climbing out but keeps sliding down.

Then suddenly he feels a tap on his shoulder.

A voice behind him says:

“You’re not getting out.”

…He got out.

The punchline works because the story quietly builds tension and expectation before flipping it at the end.

But look closer.

This joke contains nearly every storytelling element found in a novel.

 

Every Story Needs the Same Foundations

Even in a short joke, we immediately see three important things:

1. Character
A man leaving a bar.

2. Setting
Night. Rain. A cemetery.

3. Atmosphere
Dark, wet, slightly eerie.

Notice something important.

The joke doesn’t describe the bar’s name, the owner, or the décor.

Because none of that matters to the story.

This leads to one of the most important lessons in writing.

 

Give Only the Information the Story Needs

One of the biggest mistakes new writers make is overexplaining everything.

They describe the bar for two pages.
They explain the history of the cemetery.
They add details that slow the story down.

But storytelling works best when the reader receives only the information necessary to understand the moment.

Too little information causes confusion.

Too much information causes boredom.

Great storytelling lives in the balance between the two.

 

The Reader Must See the Story in Their Mind

Stories work when readers can visualize what’s happening.

They don’t need every detail.

They only need enough clues to build the scene in their imagination.

If you write about a castle, every reader will picture a different one anyway. No amount of description will make everyone imagine the same structure.

Your job isn’t to control the reader’s imagination.

Your job is to guide it.

Just enough detail to make the moment clear.

No more.

 

 

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Stories Move Through Goals and Obstacles

Another thing the joke demonstrates is desire and conflict.

The first man wants something simple:

He wants to get home quickly.

But the rain becomes an obstacle.

So he takes a shortcut.

That leads to a bigger obstacle.

Falling into the grave.

Then the tension increases again when the second man falls in too.

Each step raises the stakes slightly until the punchline delivers the surprise.

That same structure drives every novel ever written.

Characters want something.

Something gets in the way.

The story unfolds as they try to overcome it.

 

Even a Joke Follows the Three-Act Structure

Look closely and you’ll see the classic storytelling structure.

Act One — Setup

Man leaves the bar.
Rain is falling.
He cuts through the cemetery.

Act Two — Rising Conflict

He falls into the grave and can’t get out.

Act Three — Resolution

The second man falls in… and the punchline delivers the final twist.

Short story.

Long novel.

The structure is exactly the same.

 

A Practical Test for Your Own Writing

Here’s a simple question you can ask yourself while writing a scene:

If I removed this detail, would the story still work?

If the answer is yes, the detail may not be necessary.

Strong storytelling moves forward like an arrow.

Every piece of information should push the story toward its destination.

 

The Real Secret Behind Storytelling

Stories and jokes succeed for the same reason.

They move in a clear, focused direction.

They introduce a character.

Give them a goal.

Create obstacles.

And deliver a satisfying resolution.

A joke ends with laughter.

A novel ends with emotional impact.

But structurally?

They’re surprisingly similar.

So if you can tell a joke that holds someone’s attention…

You already understand more about storytelling than you think.

 

You might be interested in these blogs …

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