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 Stop Writing Flat Characters (Do This)

Stop Writing Flat Characters (Do This)

Posted on May 18, 2021March 20, 2026 by mark

Write Characters Who Think They’re Right

 

Opening Hook + Promise

Most characters fail for one simple reason:

They know they’re wrong.

Real people don’t.

If you want to write characters that feel alive—messy, believable, impossible to forget—you need to understand one truth:

Everyone believes they’re the good guy.

In this article, you’ll learn how to use that idea to create characters with real psychological depth—without overcomplicating your writing.

 

The Problem With “Simple” Characters

In fiction, it’s tempting to divide people into categories:

  • good or bad

  • smart or foolish

  • hero or villain

But real life doesn’t work like that.

People live in shades of grey.
They justify their actions.
They rewrite their own story in their head.

If your characters don’t do the same, they’ll feel flat.

 

The Golden Rule of Character Psychology

Here’s the rule that changes everything:

No one thinks they’re wrong.

Your villain doesn’t wake up thinking, “I’m the bad guy.”
Your flawed hero doesn’t admit, “I’m making terrible decisions.”

They believe:

  • they’re justified

  • they’re intelligent

  • they’re doing what’s necessary

And that belief shapes everything they say and do.

 

Show the Truth—Don’t Let Them Say It

A character’s words and actions should contradict each other.

That’s where depth comes from.

  • They say they’re kind → but act selfishly

  • They say they’re smart → but make poor choices

  • They say they’re honest → but hide the truth

This gap creates tension—and pulls the reader in.

As Aaron Sorkin puts it:

What a character does reveals who they are.
What they say reveals how they see themselves.

That difference is where your story lives.

 

 

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Why Readers Connect to This Instantly

Readers aren’t looking for perfect characters.

They’re looking for recognition.

That’s why writers like Stephen King work so well.

It’s not the monsters that keep us turning pages.

It’s the people:

  • how they react

  • how they think

  • how they justify fear, anger, and mistakes

We see ourselves in them—and that’s what makes the story feel real.

 

One Practical Step You Can Use Today

Take one of your characters and ask:

“What do they believe about themselves… that isn’t true?”

Then:

  1. Let them say it out loud

  2. Show the opposite through their actions

That single contrast will instantly add depth.

 

The Shift That Changes Everything

Stop writing characters as they are.

Start writing them as they see themselves.

Because people don’t live in reality—
they live in their version of it.

And when you capture that?

Your characters stop feeling written…

…and start feeling real.

 

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