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How to Use Objects to Show Character Arcs

How to Use Objects to Show Character Arcs

Posted on April 1, 2026 by mark

Having an Object Represent the Arc What if you could show a character’s entire emotional journey… without them saying a word? As writers, we’re often told that characters need an arc—that they must change. A story where the character ends exactly as they began can feel flat, leaving the reader wondering: what was the point?…

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Why Jaws Works (And Jaws 2 Fails)

Why Jaws Works (And Jaws 2 Fails)

Posted on March 26, 2026 by mark

The Character Arc in Jaws No One Talks About Most people think they know why Jaws works. They’ll point to the shark.Or the music.Or the direction. They’re not wrong. But they’re not right either. Because the real reason Jaws works… is something most viewers never notice. And once you see it, you can’t unsee it….

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How Plot Armour Is Ruining Your Prequel

How Plot Armour Is Ruining Your Prequel

Posted on March 18, 2026April 13, 2026 by mark

The Problem With Plot Armour in Prequels The Hook We all love a good prequel—until we realize something uncomfortable: We already know who survives. And the moment we know that… the tension disappears.   The Promise If you’ve ever struggled to make a prequel feel gripping, here’s the truth: The problem isn’t your story.It’s the…

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Why Most Short Stories Fail

Why Most Short Stories Fail

Posted on March 16, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

Why Most Short Stories Fail (And How to Fix It) Short stories have a strange problem. Just when the reader starts settling into the world… the story ends. New characters appear.A new setting begins.Another premise starts from scratch. It can feel less like reading a novel and more like being repeatedly introduced to strangers. That’s…

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The Dangerous Myth About Great Writers

The Dangerous Myth About Great Writers

Posted on March 15, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

The Myth That’s Hurting Young Writers For generations, young writers have been told a dangerous lie. The idea goes something like this: Great writers suffer. They drink too much.They struggle through broken marriages.They wrestle with depression and personal demons. Somehow, the story goes, pain produces great art. This belief even has a name: the suffering…

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How To Make Readers Feel They're Inside Your Story

How To Make Readers Feel They’re Inside Your Story

Posted on March 14, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

Connect the Reader to the Story The fastest way to lose a reader Many writers spend years perfecting plot structure, world-building, and beautiful prose. Yet readers still walk away feeling… nothing. The problem usually isn’t the plot. It’s the distance between the reader and the story. If a reader feels like an outsider watching events…

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Why Every Novel Needs a Midpoint Crisis

Why Every Novel Needs a Midpoint Crisis

Posted on March 11, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

The Hidden Problem With Long Novels Many writers spend months — sometimes years — crafting an incredible ending. The final battle is powerful.The villain is defeated.The hero changes. There’s just one problem. Readers may never get there. If your novel is 400 or 500 pages long and nothing major happens until the final chapter, readers…

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The Hidden Danger of Overwriting

The Hidden Danger of Overwriting

Posted on March 7, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

When Too Much Writing Hurts Your Story Most writers worry about not writing enough. But the opposite problem can quietly damage a story just as much. It’s called overwriting. And many writers don’t realize they’re doing it.   Underwriting vs. Overwriting Most writers understand underwriting. That’s when a story lacks the basic information readers need….

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Subtext: What Your Characters Won’t Say

Subtext: What Your Characters Won’t Say

Posted on March 7, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

The Eyes Reveal the Real Story “Oh, what daggers we throw from our eyes when we smile at those we despise.” That line captures something every writer should understand. People rarely say what they truly mean. And that’s exactly what makes fiction interesting. The worst thing a writer can do is create characters who say…

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The Real Secret to Writing Faster

The Real Secret to Writing Faster

Posted on March 6, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

What Are the Secrets to Writing at Lightning Speed? Why do some writers produce novels every year—sometimes every few months—while others struggle to finish one book in five years? Some writers stare at a blank page for hours. Others can’t type fast enough to keep up with their ideas. So what’s the difference? If you…

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Why Readers Follow Unlikable Characters

Why Readers Follow Unlikable Characters

Posted on March 5, 2026March 17, 2026 by mark

The Secret to Writing a Novel Readers Can’t Put Down Most new writers think readers must like the protagonist. But that isn’t true. Readers don’t need to like a character. They need to understand them. If a reader can see inside a character’s mind—see their fears, regrets, hopes, and motivations—they will keep turning the pages…

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