Stop Describing Characters in One Word The Rewrite The Advice That Might Be Hurting Your Novel Here’s a piece of writing advice you’ve probably heard before: “Sum up your character in one word.” Lazy. Kind. Evil. Funny. It sounds useful. Clean. Efficient. And it might be quietly weakening your entire novel. Because the…
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How to Use Objects to Show Character Arcs
Having an Object Represent the Arc What if you could show a character’s entire emotional journey… without them saying a word? As writers, we’re often told that characters need an arc—that they must change. A story where the character ends exactly as they began can feel flat, leaving the reader wondering: what was the point?…
Why Jaws Works (And Jaws 2 Fails)
The Character Arc in Jaws No One Talks About Most people think they know why Jaws works. They’ll point to the shark.Or the music.Or the direction. They’re not wrong. But they’re not right either. Because the real reason Jaws works… is something most viewers never notice. And once you see it, you can’t unsee it….
Why Most Short Stories Fail
Why Most Short Stories Fail (And How to Fix It) Short stories have a strange problem. Just when the reader starts settling into the world… the story ends. New characters appear.A new setting begins.Another premise starts from scratch. It can feel less like reading a novel and more like being repeatedly introduced to strangers. That’s…
The Dangerous Myth About Great Writers
The Myth That’s Hurting Young Writers For generations, young writers have been told a dangerous lie. The idea goes something like this: Great writers suffer. They drink too much.They struggle through broken marriages.They wrestle with depression and personal demons. Somehow, the story goes, pain produces great art. This belief even has a name: the suffering…
The Hidden Danger of Overwriting
When Too Much Writing Hurts Your Story Most writers worry about not writing enough. But the opposite problem can quietly damage a story just as much. It’s called overwriting. And many writers don’t realize they’re doing it. Underwriting vs. Overwriting Most writers understand underwriting. That’s when a story lacks the basic information readers need….
Subtext: What Your Characters Won’t Say
The Eyes Reveal the Real Story “Oh, what daggers we throw from our eyes when we smile at those we despise.” That line captures something every writer should understand. People rarely say what they truly mean. And that’s exactly what makes fiction interesting. The worst thing a writer can do is create characters who say…
Write Endings That Echo
The Final Scene Isn’t the Secret. The Arc Is. Every great novel leaves us with a final image we can’t forget. But here’s what most new writers misunderstand: It’s not the last scene that makes the story powerful. It’s the character arc that earns it. Readers don’t close a book thinking, “What a nice description.”They…
Tell the Ending First? A Writer’s Secret
Should You Tell Readers the Ending at the Beginning? Most writers are afraid of giving too much away. They worry that if readers know where the story is headed, the mystery disappears. But here’s the uncomfortable truth: Some of the most successful stories ever written tell you the destination almost immediately. And readers love them…
Ghost Noir
Ghost Noir by Mark Douglas Doran click here to download https://markdouglasdoran.com/wp-content/uploads/2024/01/Ghost-Noir-1-1.epub or available at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1509036 https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/ghost-noir-mark-douglas-doran/1144658958?ean=2940179086932 William Grey is a P.I. for the dead. Ghosts are his clients. a tougher-than-nails detective who’s seen it all and then some. Hired by a beautiful woman to solve her murder. But is she who she really seems? What…
Beyond Heaven and Hell
Beyond Heaven and Hell by Mark Douglas Doran click here to download https://markdouglasdoran.com/wp-content/uploads/2023/12/Beyond-Heaven-and-Hell-ebub.epub or available at https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1499204 https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/beyond-heaven-and-hell-mark-douglas-doran/1144535770?ean=2940167664838 12-year-old Luke is dead and his problems have just begun. His soul has been kidnapped by a one-year-old talking baby nicknamed Babylon. Along with two other kids John and Paul. They’ll be taken to an abandoned…












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